03-05-2011, 06:14 PM
I'm trying to write a long poem about an astronaut looking back on his past. These are my first four lines...
May I profess a past adrift in darkness;
How I, deprived of kin, enduring exile,
Floated years lonely amongst the cold company
Of stars. How, inside my stranded satellite
I wept and wished for nothing but the world.
Any suggestions?
May I profess a past adrift in darkness;
How I, deprived of kin, enduring exile,
Floated years lonely amongst the cold company
Of stars. How, inside my stranded satellite
I wept and wished for nothing but the world.
Any suggestions?