03-04-2011, 06:35 PM
Thank you both for your kind words and feedback
Addy, I will think about removing that line. I kind of see what you mean. It doesn't really relate to what's been going in the verses before. And as for the navel stanza, if you think those lines don't add anything, you should see all the crap I edited out
Addy, I will think about removing that line. I kind of see what you mean. It doesn't really relate to what's been going in the verses before. And as for the navel stanza, if you think those lines don't add anything, you should see all the crap I edited out
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe