02-26-2011, 01:49 PM
Thank you for the feedback Billy. This is the first real prose I've written for quite a long time. It was inspired by Highsmith's pocket book of short stories Little Tales of Misogyny. What do you mean by beginning sentences sooner?
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

