02-26-2011, 01:37 PM
i read this a few times this morning before the shopping, and a few times since getting back and i think it superb.
if i had a nit it would be the length, everything happens too quickly. they travel such a long path in such a short time. for me this scene should be trebled at least. the articulation i love and the direction works really well.
the importance of being ernest was a comedy/play by oscar wilde (i hated it lmao)
it's just the newby feels that type of character.
great short, jack.
great little read with a cliff hanging end as to where they are. it sounds like a personal hell to me.
if i had a nit it would be the length, everything happens too quickly. they travel such a long path in such a short time. for me this scene should be trebled at least. the articulation i love and the direction works really well.
the importance of being ernest was a comedy/play by oscar wilde (i hated it lmao)
it's just the newby feels that type of character.
great short, jack.
great little read with a cliff hanging end as to where they are. it sounds like a personal hell to me.