02-23-2011, 09:52 PM
(02-23-2011, 08:22 AM)Heslopian Wrote: I agree with Billy, no real negatives here, just a very potent and nicely stylised piece of verse, dense and mysterious like a lot of your work, but with a tad more control (the lines aren't as long) this time around, which shows you're trying to improve as a writer, and succeeding marvellously.Thank you Heslo'
