Tumbleweed (From the perspective of a snake)
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The word "drool" in the second line seems unecessary, but other than that this is a brilliant short poem. Evocative and sharp as a tack. Thanks for the read Lawrence.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Tumbleweed (From the perspective of a snake) - by Lawrence - 02-19-2011, 02:21 AM
RE: Tumbleweed (From the perspective of a snake) - by heslopian - 02-19-2011, 09:03 AM



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