"Measurement."

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"Measurement."

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Are you alluding to me?

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02-14-2011, 06:57 PM

would married work better Ris?
and is the first 'the' needed?

i really like it. the cross over from scientist to mother in law
works well. thanks for the smile, and the read

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"Measurement." - by Ris Yerg - 02-14-2011, 06:45 PM

RE: "Measurement." - by billy - 02-14-2011, 06:57 PM

RE: "Measurement." - by addy - 02-15-2011, 01:51 PM

RE: "Measurement." - by Ris Yerg - 02-15-2011, 03:43 PM

RE: "Measurement." - by madA - 02-16-2011, 01:46 AM

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