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02-14-2011, 05:39 PM

My only nit is the title, which I don't quite get LOL Tongue

But otherwise, very nice. This one really cut me to the quick

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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"Today." - by Ris Yerg - 02-11-2011, 05:18 PM

RE: "Today." - by billy - 02-14-2011, 01:58 PM

RE: "Today." - by addy - 02-14-2011, 05:39 PM

RE: "Today." - by Ris Yerg - 02-14-2011, 06:03 PM

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