02-11-2011, 12:24 PM
Great mood with this one, and not at all what I expected by the end (which is a good thing 
). My tiny, tiny suggestion is to figure out a way to insert the definition of that latin phrase into the poem, or at least imply it... just a suggestion because such a short poem doesn't really need a footnote imo.
Thanks for the read
). My tiny, tiny suggestion is to figure out a way to insert the definition of that latin phrase into the poem, or at least imply it... just a suggestion because such a short poem doesn't really need a footnote imo.Thanks for the read
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?