02-11-2011, 12:03 PM
I really adored the imagery in this one. Probably wouldn't have chosen that last line, but that's a very minor nitpick (I probably just didn't get the deeper theme here
). Vivid, almost syrupy words. Nicely done
). Vivid, almost syrupy words. Nicely done
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
