02-11-2011, 05:40 AM
Is the adjective excellently required at all? In a piece as beautifully simple this, such adornments aren't really needed. Other than that minor gripe, this poem is divine. Thanks for the read Ris.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

