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"Flat."

"Flat."
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02-10-2011, 10:43 AM
the last verse turns the poem from a pleasant jaunt in
flatness to something more macabre.
with that last verse the poem became more that two dimensional.
thanks for the read.
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"Flat." - by Ris Yerg - 02-08-2011, 06:37 PM
RE: "Flat." - by WolfLarsen - 02-09-2011, 07:35 AM
RE: "Flat." - by Ris Yerg - 02-09-2011, 05:50 PM
RE: "Flat." - by madA - 02-10-2011, 03:20 AM
RE: "Flat." - by billy - 02-10-2011, 10:43 AM
RE: "Flat." - by Ris Yerg - 02-10-2011, 04:12 PM
RE: "Flat." - by heslopian - 02-11-2011, 05:49 AM



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