02-07-2011, 03:44 PM
not sure about all the capped words within the poem but the edit makes it a better piece for me. i think the verse breaks helps the flow. jmo
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Like The Surgeon's Knife--revised
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Like The Surgeon's Knife--revised - by waitingforgodet - 02-07-2011, 12:07 AM
RE: Like The Surgeon's Knife--revised - by billy - 02-07-2011, 03:44 PM
RE: Like The Surgeon's Knife--revised - by waitingforgodet - 02-07-2011, 09:23 PM
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RE: Like The Surgeon's Knife--revised - by waitingforgodet - 02-09-2011, 07:35 AM
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