Fire Burning Slowly

[waitingforgodet]

I think you have a basis for a good poem here; however, I'm not clear on what your intent is: Sadism, Dominatrix, revenge on men because of what they made this woman become? Any theme can work, though. I like some of your lines a lot:
I made you my pawn--perhaps I might break some of your lines into two lines.
I made you my toy--or,

My mind was set evil.
I was looking to destroy.
I made you my pawn.
I made you my toy.

Would probably take out, "I don't usually hurt people, well not much."'

or,

I'll twist your bones.
I want to hear you cry.
Make you scream through the night.
You're just an ugly kid;
you're just one of many drones.

I hope some of what I suggest has been helpful--jim