Like The Surgeon's Knife

[waitingforgodet]

Thank you, Addy. I think I've improved it, though. Will post revision today--jim

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This is a beautiful poem. Not sure if this means anything, but I was listening to Billy Idol's Dancing With Myself as I read this and and in a weird way it synchs up. Don't worry, I'm not crazy I wish I could establish a rhyming piece as natural and moving as this; it's been so long since I tried proper form that I've somewhat lost my touch with it.

Jack, I just listened to Billy Idol's Dancing with myself. I do like the song, but don't understand what you mean regarding my poem. I've reworked the poem and will post the revision today--jim