02-06-2011, 10:32 PM
Really liked this. There's something about the incompleteness of it, the oddly hanging reveal of the vivid yet not-so-full picture that gives it extra punch. The very physical, matter-of-fact descriptions give plain revelation while deliberately making the immaterial metaphors just tantalizingly out of grasp. Very, very nice.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?