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"Inference - 2."

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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02-05-2011, 09:43 AM

i like the confidence of it.

would the 2nd line read better as;
we are both splendid!
thanks for these short ones ris. i enjoy them

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"Inference - 2." - by Ris Yerg - 02-04-2011, 03:49 PM

RE: "Inference - 2." - by billy - 02-05-2011, 09:43 AM

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