02-04-2011, 11:42 AM
Thanks for the kind words and feedback Billy
I especially love the YELLOW idea. That really makes the line more pithy. I'll use most of your suggestions, though I think I'll "my" before "father" and "mother"; without it those lines just seem a tad twee, like calling them pater and mater.
I especially love the YELLOW idea. That really makes the line more pithy. I'll use most of your suggestions, though I think I'll "my" before "father" and "mother"; without it those lines just seem a tad twee, like calling them pater and mater.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe