ATM machines steal my brain

[LiteraryAntiquity]

i think some of the lines are a little long but
i like it. in truth i like it a whole lot.
some of the lines are superb in their originality.
i also like the wit.
i think a bit of enjambment would make this a really good great prose poem LA

thanks for the read as always.

Okay so I've sort of cheated the eight line thing but hopefully it works better for it. =]