02-03-2011, 11:50 AM
a simple wow should suffice.
for me the middle one was absolutely nothing but great, well worthy of publishing.
original funny, loving and so down to earth. i love it. this is a poem worth remembering.
the 1st is also very good. can't see anything in it i'd change
and the last one, while good it feels a little blasé (maybe even a just a little hall mark) but good non the less. as a trio they shine
brighter than they do individually. well done LA. you moved me.
thanks for the read.
for me the middle one was absolutely nothing but great, well worthy of publishing.
original funny, loving and so down to earth. i love it. this is a poem worth remembering.
the 1st is also very good. can't see anything in it i'd change
and the last one, while good it feels a little blasé (maybe even a just a little hall mark) but good non the less. as a trio they shine
brighter than they do individually. well done LA. you moved me.
thanks for the read.