Jenny Dear
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(02-02-2011, 11:37 AM)addy Wrote:  I quite liked this... though is it wrong that I felt creeped out by the beginning lines? LOL Big Grin (I know that's definitely not the intention... guess I've read too many stuff where innocent obsession is turned sinister, so it's made me paranoid haha Smile)
thanks addy, yes, if cheating can be called sinister, then it is a sinister poem--the last line, of course, indicates that. But tell me how you knew from the first lines, please--jim

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Jenny Dear - by waitingforgodet - 02-02-2011, 02:07 AM
RE: Jenny Dear - by billy - 02-02-2011, 11:23 AM
RE: Jenny Dear - by waitingforgodet - 02-02-2011, 07:29 PM
RE: Jenny Dear - by addy - 02-02-2011, 11:37 AM
RE: Jenny Dear - by waitingforgodet - 02-02-2011, 07:41 PM
RE: Jenny Dear - by addy - 02-06-2011, 10:17 PM
RE: Jenny Dear - by billy - 02-02-2011, 07:38 PM



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