02-02-2011, 07:41 PM
(02-02-2011, 11:37 AM)addy Wrote: I quite liked this... though is it wrong that I felt creeped out by the beginning lines? LOLthanks addy, yes, if cheating can be called sinister, then it is a sinister poem--the last line, of course, indicates that. But tell me how you knew from the first lines, please--jim(I know that's definitely not the intention... guess I've read too many stuff where innocent obsession is turned sinister, so it's made me paranoid haha
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(I know that's definitely not the intention... guess I've read too many stuff where innocent obsession is turned sinister, so it's made me paranoid haha
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