02-02-2011, 11:37 AM
I quite liked this... though is it wrong that I felt creeped out by the beginning lines? LOL 
(I know that's definitely not the intention... guess I've read too many stuff where innocent obsession is turned sinister, so it's made me paranoid haha 
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(I know that's definitely not the intention... guess I've read too many stuff where innocent obsession is turned sinister, so it's made me paranoid haha )
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?