The Disused Canal;
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thanks for the feedback

i'm not that into rhyming poetry jim. i think you have a valid point that it could have more stanza
and maybe the stanely though the reiteration was intended as it was the thing most remembered.
your opinion of whether it's a poem or not is something i can't really comment on as it is your opinion.
i accept that it's your opinion and gratefully accept it's honesty.

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The Disused Canal; - by billy - 01-29-2011, 07:53 PM
RE: The Disused Canal; - by waitingforgodet - 01-30-2011, 12:17 AM
RE: The Disused Canal; - by billy - 01-30-2011, 03:12 AM
RE: The Disused Canal; - by waitingforgodet - 01-30-2011, 10:22 PM
RE: The Disused Canal; - by billy - 01-31-2011, 05:59 AM
RE: The Disused Canal; - by waitingforgodet - 01-31-2011, 06:04 AM



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