01-30-2011, 03:12 AM
thanks for the feedback
i'm not that into rhyming poetry jim. i think you have a valid point that it could have more stanza
and maybe the stanely though the reiteration was intended as it was the thing most remembered.
your opinion of whether it's a poem or not is something i can't really comment on as it is your opinion.
i accept that it's your opinion and gratefully accept it's honesty.
i'm not that into rhyming poetry jim. i think you have a valid point that it could have more stanza
and maybe the stanely though the reiteration was intended as it was the thing most remembered.
your opinion of whether it's a poem or not is something i can't really comment on as it is your opinion.
i accept that it's your opinion and gratefully accept it's honesty.
