01-30-2011, 03:03 AM
(01-30-2011, 02:02 AM)Heslopian Wrote: I like the stripped down, imagistic style of this piece; it reminds me of William Carlos Williams. Thank you for the read, Ris Yerg.Thank you so much for your kind comment!
R.Y.
(01-30-2011, 03:02 AM)billy Wrote:Thank you, Billy!(01-29-2011, 11:59 PM)Ris Yerg Wrote: Night.nice minimalistic piece, it has a Japanese quality about it.
Winter.
Silver world.
A birch tree -
With a last leaf
On its branches
Hides naked moon
From curious glances -
Forgot, innocently,
Its own nakedness
And beauty.
thanks for the read.
Yes, I like minimalism! And if it reminds you Japanese stile - I'm happy! I like Japanese poetry!

