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"Two beauties."

"Two beauties."
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01-30-2011, 03:02 AM
(01-29-2011, 11:59 PM)Ris Yerg Wrote:  Night.
Winter.
Silver world.
A birch tree -
With a last leaf
On its branches
Hides naked moon
From curious glances -
Forgot, innocently,
Its own nakedness
And beauty.
nice minimalistic piece, it has a Japanese quality about it.
thanks for the read.
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"Two beauties." - by Ris Yerg - 01-29-2011, 11:59 PM
RE: "Two beauties." - by heslopian - 01-30-2011, 02:02 AM
RE: "Two beauties." - by Ris Yerg - 01-30-2011, 03:03 AM
RE: "Two beauties." - by billy - 01-30-2011, 03:28 AM
RE: "Two beauties." - by billy - 01-30-2011, 03:02 AM



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