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Paper Plane
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01-28-2011, 06:54 AM
This is beautiful. I can't find a single thing wrong with it, LA. More like prose than poetry, but none the worse for that; a dark and sad and haunting tale, worthy of publication, perhaps more as a short story than a poem though (a prose poem, perhaps?).
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Paper Plane - by LiteraryAntiquity - 01-26-2011, 09:04 AM
RE: Paper Plane - by srijantje - 01-26-2011, 12:12 PM
RE: Paper Plane - by billy - 01-26-2011, 12:46 PM
RE: Paper Plane - by heslopian - 01-28-2011, 06:54 AM
RE: Paper Plane - by billy - 01-28-2011, 10:16 AM
RE: Paper Plane - by LiteraryAntiquity - 02-03-2011, 04:22 AM
RE: Paper Plane - by billy - 02-03-2011, 11:43 AM
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