Paper Plane

Paper Plane

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01-26-2011, 12:46 PM (This post was last modified: 01-28-2011, 10:14 AM by billy.)

absolutely wonderful.

if i had a nit it would be to work on the enjambment

i like all of it the imagery the words, the right left nostril thing
simply excellent from top to toe.

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Paper Plane - by LiteraryAntiquity - 01-26-2011, 09:04 AM

RE: Paper Plane - by srijantje - 01-26-2011, 12:12 PM

RE: Paper Plane - by billy - 01-26-2011, 12:46 PM

RE: Paper Plane - by heslopian - 01-28-2011, 06:54 AM

RE: Paper Plane - by billy - 01-28-2011, 10:16 AM

RE: Paper Plane - by LiteraryAntiquity - 02-03-2011, 04:22 AM

RE: Paper Plane - by billy - 02-03-2011, 11:43 AM

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