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Fruit And Veg Don’t Make Me Cry
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01-26-2011, 05:38 AM
This makes me think of the old "sticks and stones" dictum. A charming little poem, somehow more so because it was written by you. Though I'd suggest putting a comma after the first "cry" and "either," and you missed a "me" before the second "cry."
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Fruit And Veg Don’t Make Me Cry - by billy - 01-19-2011, 03:50 PM
RE: Fruit And Veg Don’t Make Me Cry - by addy - 01-23-2011, 06:18 PM
RE: Fruit And Veg Don’t Make Me Cry - by waitingforgodet - 01-23-2011, 11:29 PM
RE: Fruit And Veg Don’t Make Me Cry - by billy - 01-24-2011, 10:37 AM
RE: Fruit And Veg Don’t Make Me Cry - by heslopian - 01-26-2011, 05:38 AM
RE: Fruit And Veg Don’t Make Me Cry - by mrmod - 01-26-2011, 05:52 AM
RE: Fruit And Veg Don’t Make Me Cry - by billy - 01-28-2011, 01:20 PM
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