Church Youth Group Holiday

[billy]

One question: Following the "cheaper gift" line, when you say you're not sure about the elipse, do you mean the whole line or just the brackets?

i found the words were good, just the ellipses

i think the style of this one is prevalent in a few of your poems. the canteen one for sure. they're like hoping to get laid poetry hehe.

anyway, it's a definite keeper for me