Shower
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I agree with Billy. The last line is almost a poem in itself, perhaps a haiku. And the "poppies" simile is beyond divine.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Shower - by addy - 01-21-2011, 01:56 PM
RE: Shower - by billy - 01-24-2011, 10:43 AM
RE: Shower - by heslopian - 01-24-2011, 01:24 PM
RE: Shower - by Ris Yerg - 01-30-2011, 07:34 PM
RE: Shower - by addy - 02-11-2011, 12:09 PM



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