Love Song
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@Billy - Thank you for the kind words and feedback, BillySmile I will use some of your suggestions in a mo. Glad you noticed my attempt at black humour; I was nervous that that last line might just be seen as pretentious! When I published this several months ago on DU, I think many people got the impression that there was no nudge nudge wink wink involved, and that I was being deadly seriousBig Grin
@Addy - Thank you for your kind praise, AddySmile
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Love Song - by heslopian - 01-20-2011, 10:34 PM
RE: Love Song - by billy - 01-21-2011, 12:48 PM
RE: Love Song - by heslopian - 01-21-2011, 10:59 PM
RE: Love Song - by addy - 01-21-2011, 02:16 PM
RE: Love Song - by Ris Yerg - 01-30-2011, 03:15 AM



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