Glass Soldiers
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Glass soldiers, is definitely a stunning image, just fantastic. Love the story arc of this as a whole... to have become a creature of the sun being both a revelation and a tragedy. For some reason I felt your very last line was the weakest, though, like it doesn't do enough justice to the rest of the poem... this is just imo though.

Thanks so much for sharing this Smile
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Glass Soldiers - by heslopian - 01-21-2011, 01:48 AM
RE: Glass Soldiers - by billy - 01-21-2011, 05:51 AM
RE: Glass Soldiers - by billy - 01-21-2011, 12:19 PM
RE: Glass Soldiers - by heslopian - 01-21-2011, 10:52 PM
RE: Glass Soldiers - by addy - 01-21-2011, 02:29 PM



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