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Stop Knife-crime. [Warning: Word Offensive]
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01-21-2011, 02:11 PM
Wow, this was visceral, and in a very good way. I loved the parts where she wavers between her narration and her tearing grief, the heartbreak and the bitter pragmatism. Great narrative voice her. Nice job
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Stop Knife-crime. [Warning: Word Offensive] - by LiteraryAntiquity - 01-21-2011, 12:25 PM
RE: Stop Knife-crime. [Warning: Word Offensive] - by billy - 01-21-2011, 01:00 PM
RE: Stop Knife-crime. [Warning: Word Offensive] - by LiteraryAntiquity - 01-21-2011, 01:04 PM
RE: Stop Knife-crime. [Warning: Word Offensive] - by billy - 01-21-2011, 01:08 PM
RE: Stop Knife-crime. [Warning: Word Offensive] - by LiteraryAntiquity - 01-21-2011, 01:11 PM
RE: Stop Knife-crime. [Warning: Word Offensive] - by billy - 01-21-2011, 01:35 PM
RE: Stop Knife-crime. [Warning: Word Offensive] - by addy - 01-21-2011, 02:11 PM
RE: Stop Knife-crime. [Warning: Word Offensive] - by LiteraryAntiquity - 01-21-2011, 11:19 PM
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