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Short Walk to the Spirit (A Tercet)
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01-21-2011, 02:00 PM
I like the alluring vagueness of the scenario, and how it tied together with that pitch-perfect ending. Personally, I liked the specificness of how you described the imagery, just imo
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Short Walk to the Spirit (A Tercet) - by heslopian - 01-20-2011, 03:46 AM
RE: Short Walk to the Spirit (A Tercet) - by billy - 01-20-2011, 07:37 AM
RE: Short Walk to the Spirit (A Tercet) - by heslopian - 01-20-2011, 10:26 AM
RE: Short Walk to the Spirit (A Tercet) - by addy - 01-21-2011, 02:00 PM
RE: Short Walk to the Spirit (A Tercet) - by heslopian - 01-21-2011, 11:01 PM
RE: Short Walk to the Spirit (A Tercet) - by Ris Yerg - 01-30-2011, 07:36 PM
RE: Short Walk to the Spirit (A Tercet) - by heslopian - 02-01-2011, 10:51 AM
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