Hello Gran.

Hello Gran.

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01-20-2011, 10:28 AM

Do you need another word in "volano"'s place? The line would work just as well with nothing there except "huge open hearth" I think.

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Hello Gran. - by billy - 01-19-2011, 08:18 PM

RE: Hello Gran. - by heslopian - 01-20-2011, 04:18 AM

RE: Hello Gran. - by billy - 01-20-2011, 09:47 AM

RE: Hello Gran. - by heslopian - 01-20-2011, 10:28 AM

RE: Hello Gran. - by billy - 01-20-2011, 01:47 PM

RE: Hello Gran. - by Aish - 07-09-2011, 03:09 PM

RE: Hello Gran. - by billy - 07-09-2011, 03:47 PM

RE: Hello Gran. - by Aish - 07-09-2011, 04:43 PM

RE: Hello Gran. - by billy - 07-09-2011, 05:11 PM

RE: Hello Gran. - by Aish - 07-09-2011, 05:30 PM

RE: Hello Gran. - by Leanne - 07-11-2011, 09:07 AM

RE: Hello Gran. - by billy - 07-11-2011, 09:20 AM

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