01-20-2011, 07:37 AM
feels a little off kilter flow wise for me jack.
would "a" on the 1st line and "the' on the last help it a little?
is 'two' needed?
other than that the content is good and the feeling of acceptance of failure is great.
nicely done
would "a" on the 1st line and "the' on the last help it a little?
is 'two' needed?
other than that the content is good and the feeling of acceptance of failure is great.
nicely done