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The Doldrums.

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The Dog's Bollocks.

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01-19-2011, 11:18 AM

Sure, it's your poem Smile

. Also forgot to add:I love the turn of phrase "wet new moon." Really nice job with this one

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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The Doldrums. - by billy - 01-16-2011, 04:01 PM

RE: The Doldrums. - by addy - 01-18-2011, 01:19 PM

RE: The Doldrums. - by billy - 01-19-2011, 10:48 AM

RE: The Doldrums. - by addy - 01-19-2011, 11:18 AM

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