The Window (2nd revision of The Coat)

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The Window (2nd revision of The Coat)

Lawrence
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01-15-2011, 09:32 PM

Thanks Billy! I'll probably take out blood and light, and I'll deeply consider your other comments.
I'll do one more revision of this, and then I'll put it away for a month or two.

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The Window (2nd revision of The Coat) - by Lawrence - 01-15-2011, 02:21 AM

RE: The Window (2nd revision of The Coat) - by billy - 01-15-2011, 07:46 PM

RE: The Window (2nd revision of The Coat) - by Lawrence - 01-15-2011, 09:32 PM

RE: The Window (2nd revision of The Coat) - by heslopian - 01-16-2011, 03:58 AM

RE: The Window (2nd revision of The Coat) - by Todd - 02-01-2011, 05:14 AM

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