01-13-2011, 04:10 PM
(01-13-2011, 06:04 AM)billy Wrote: a cheeky little piece lol.Admittedly when I wrote that first line a scene from South Park recurred in my mind, where Paris Hilton finds herself lodged fully inside a man's anus
not sure clamber inside. it sounds like all of you is getting in there. which i suppose you could metaphorically speaking.
thanks for the read as always.
Not sure how I would change that though. I'll give it some thought.Cheeky? I thought I was being all deep and profound
Thanks for the kind words and feedback, Billy
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe