The Empty Cave (Revision)

[Todd]

I don't mean to be cryptic but in some ways yes you got a sense of the poem. There is another way of looking at it but it doesn't invalidate your take at all. I'm a firm believer though that once you put something out there you lose the right to say BUT THIS WAS MY INTENT. Your intent is what they take away. That moves to the reader. Just my opinion.

So, is your take the full picture no, is that an issue no. Is your take still pretty right on in some key areas yeah.

Cryptic poems can be fun like that.