The Empty Cave (Revision)

The Empty Cave (Revision)

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01-12-2011, 03:13 PM

the other changes, primarily the verse merge works well.
i don't normally have need to know if i got the gist of a poem but did i? it's okay if i didn't because i got something from it that was worthwhile anyway Big Grin

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The Empty Cave (Revision) - by Todd - 10-31-2010, 07:17 AM

RE: The Empty Cave - by billy - 10-31-2010, 01:06 PM

RE: The Empty Cave - by Todd - 10-31-2010, 01:11 PM

RE: The Empty Cave - by heslopian - 11-03-2010, 01:00 AM

RE: The Empty Cave - by Todd - 11-11-2010, 05:26 AM

RE: The Empty Cave - by Lawrence - 11-16-2010, 03:08 AM

RE: The Empty Cave - by Todd - 11-16-2010, 03:42 AM

RE: The Empty Cave - by billy - 11-16-2010, 05:52 AM

RE: The Empty Cave - by Lawrence - 11-16-2010, 04:34 AM

RE: The Empty Cave - by Todd - 11-16-2010, 05:16 AM

RE: The Empty Cave (Revision) - by Todd - 01-12-2011, 05:54 AM

RE: The Empty Cave (Revision) - by billy - 01-12-2011, 11:27 AM

RE: The Empty Cave (Revision) - by Todd - 01-12-2011, 11:48 AM

RE: The Empty Cave (Revision) - by Todd - 01-12-2011, 03:06 PM

RE: The Empty Cave (Revision) - by billy - 01-12-2011, 03:13 PM

RE: The Empty Cave (Revision) - by Todd - 01-12-2011, 03:18 PM

RE: The Empty Cave (Revision) - by billy - 01-13-2011, 11:36 AM

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