The Empty Cave (Revision)

[Todd]

I did a rewrite (almost all I'm doing these days). If you've seen the movie Adaptation there's a scene where a character explains how he used to be into tropical fish and then he had this epiphany:

John Laroche: Then one morning, I woke up and said, "Fuck fish." I renounce fish, I will never set foot in that ocean again. And there hasn't been a time where I have stuck so much as a toe back in that ocean.

Susan Orlean: But why?

John Laroche: Done with fish.

So, I made some changes but considered the comments and said Fuck Horse. It wasn't worth keeping.

Best,

Todd