A Cinquain

[billy]

Loathing:
Fermented rage.
I study myself
like a shy coroner:
Piteous.

the forms there jack though some would say use ;
2 syllables line
4 syllables line
6 syllables line
8 syllables line
2 syllables line

but the purist way is how you have it or the syll's.
so you have the form right which is good

after all that guff, i can say nice Cinquain, which says much more than it seems.