A Poem For My Private Parts

[kath3]

First of all great poem ... I really enjoyed it.
I agree with Todd about the over usage of "my".

I have exploded again. You've identified yourself
Leaking fluids, I stifle a scream,
as my skull hits the headboard it's your skull
and my fingers become lost must be your fingers also
in a forest of pubic hair,
beset by this useless teenage seed
I was warned against using on comely lasses

Favorite lines ...
I have exploded again.
Leaking fluids I scream.
beset by this useless teenage seed
and dreaming of violation, control.
Romance through dominance
I've bled the dream out through my genitals