01-07-2011, 12:26 PM
Thanks for all your comments guys. I hadn't really thought about the title before, and how it might render allusion to narrative voice unnecessary, but I see what you mean. I'd still rather keep "my fingers" though; for me it just makes me more sense.
CB - Of course I'll let you! Just look for my name on the poem forums.
CB - Of course I'll let you! Just look for my name on the poem forums.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe