01-07-2011, 12:22 PM
How is it different from my usual stuff? I began writing this as a serious piece, but it became more tongue in cheek and prosey as I went along. I was experimenting with the removal of enjambment from my work, ending each line with punctuation.
I know what you mean about the second verse. I did mean to change that first line so it wasn't directly addressing my aunt, but I must have just forgotten.
Thanks as always for the kind words and feedback, Billy.
I know what you mean about the second verse. I did mean to change that first line so it wasn't directly addressing my aunt, but I must have just forgotten.
Thanks as always for the kind words and feedback, Billy.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe