01-07-2011, 10:34 AM
if we're all gonna pitch in, i have to say. heed the title;
often specially to todd whose good at making use of the title i can go astary with a poem because i don't read the title.
if we think about it, the title IS the first line of a poem. it's the first thing we (should) read of the poem. so on this one i already knew it was you and your privates
jmo. as todd says though and as you know yourself. the choice to change or not always resides with the writer.
feels a little like n us and them scenario doesn't it well, this happens when we address another persons comment.
CB if you were going to say to jack .... then say it to jack and not to someone else. after all it's their opinion. it's what they feel. there is no right or wrong even if it's right or wrong. and todd or me or anyone else will still see your opinion. (i'm not shouting at you so don't bitch slap me please )
the reason i've done this post is because all too often i've seen people in poetry groups take sides as to what is and isn't right about a poem. it why we comment on the poem and not another persons comment. (hope i have'nt offended anyone)
often specially to todd whose good at making use of the title i can go astary with a poem because i don't read the title.
if we think about it, the title IS the first line of a poem. it's the first thing we (should) read of the poem. so on this one i already knew it was you and your privates
jmo. as todd says though and as you know yourself. the choice to change or not always resides with the writer. feels a little like n us and them scenario doesn't it
well, this happens when we address another persons comment. CB if you were going to say to jack .... then say it to jack and not to someone else. after all it's their opinion. it's what they feel. there is no right or wrong even if it's right or wrong. and todd or me or anyone else will still see your opinion. (i'm not shouting at you so don't bitch slap me please
)the reason i've done this post is because all too often i've seen people in poetry groups take sides as to what is and isn't right about a poem. it why we comment on the poem and not another persons comment. (hope i have'nt offended anyone)