Friction (Revision 2)

Friction (Revision 2)

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01-07-2011, 10:23 AM

funny how a single word if changed can make such a difference?

i think because tongues was in the opening line it's a lot more noticeable (and make the poem read a lot better)

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Friction (Revision 2) - by Todd - 12-22-2010, 05:24 AM

RE: Friction - by billy - 12-22-2010, 12:50 PM

RE: Friction - by Todd - 12-22-2010, 01:19 PM

RE: Friction - by heslopian - 12-22-2010, 01:26 PM

RE: Friction - by billy - 12-22-2010, 01:36 PM

RE: Friction (Revision) - by Todd - 01-06-2011, 02:23 AM

RE: Friction (Revision) - by heslopian - 01-06-2011, 08:38 AM

RE: Friction (Revision) - by billy - 01-06-2011, 11:09 AM

RE: Friction (Revision) - by Todd - 01-07-2011, 02:19 AM

RE: Friction (Revision) - by billy - 01-07-2011, 10:23 AM

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