01-07-2011, 02:12 AM
Remove them or keep them Jack: Obviously your call. The reason that I don't feel that there is this ambiguity toward subject is because the poem is called: A poem for MY private parts. I think that points to who the pubic hair and the fingers belong to. Again, it is purely an opinion and editing and the final result is a very personal choice. Whatever you choose like I said earlier it's good work.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson