01-07-2011, 12:53 AM
(01-07-2011, 12:25 AM)Heslopian Wrote:Makes perfect sense to me Heslopian!(01-07-2011, 12:16 AM)cigarbabe Wrote: I was going to say to Jack that,if he removes the my from these lines, "my fingers" and "my pubic hair", who's fingers and hair would he be talking about?That's sort of why I didn't want to remove the "my" before "fingers."
It wouldn't make any sense to me as a reader of the poem which, I adore!
Just my2 cents! [Image: http://serve.mysmiley.net/evilgrin/evilgrin0010.gif]
C.B.
I'd love to read some more of your poetry if you'd let me?
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